gjhhhhhh
Posts : 9 Join date : 2013-01-18 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: One of many places gjh likes to share her writing :) Wed Jan 23, 2013 1:07 am | |
| After I starting seriously sharing my work on Facebook (but only a small fraction of my friends usually saw them as far as I know and sometimes nobody really bothered) I wanted a lot more people to know about my work. But I didn't want to put the Notes' settings on public so I decided to do them in forums of sites I play on half for the fact I can stay more anonymous. I recently turned in an ode in my English class and my teacher praised me so much I got embarrassed and that ode hadn't even been as good as some of the other things I write. Sometimes the rhymes are weird in the poems and may also get out of rhythm but that will only be because I needed something that rhymed and I had few other ways to word the line with a certain ending rhyme. Some of these may have no titles because I don't know what to name them. Those will be labeled [Title Needed] and viewers may suggest titles as they please. I will always try to use proper grammar but in poems I usually have trouble figuring out where commas should go. These are all pretty appropriate although some were written when I was depressed or angry and needed to express it. I'll mark those so you'll know though. Any words that could have an inappropriate meaning as well as an appropriate meaning will be pointed out to you beforehand. Sometimes I may post short stories/one shots here as well... So here goes nothing...
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Song of the Wolves
I am the cloud of day And the fog at night, The bright silver ray Of the sun shining bright. Smooth as a river, Fast as a deer, Darting like a sliver Of ice later in the year. Howling to the moon On cold clear nights, Singing to the tune Of wilderness sights. I am the voice That sings this song, Of rejoice Of seasons gone. The whistling wind Shall carry my song, To those who will send The message along. Of wolves singing in the night. Singing of the seasons past. Under the brightness of a full moon's light, This song tonight will not last. This was also transferred onto a Google Docs document and the document can be found here.
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Mindless Modee
Posts : 24 Join date : 2012-12-26 Age : 26 Location : California
| Subject: Re: One of many places gjh likes to share her writing :) Wed Jan 23, 2013 11:07 pm | |
| Beautiful Keep on writing, I am enjoying your literature. | |
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gjhhhhhh
Posts : 9 Join date : 2013-01-18 Location : Somewhere
| Subject: Re: One of many places gjh likes to share her writing :) Thu Jan 24, 2013 1:58 am | |
| Well then, here goes another one ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Eagle's Flight
I'm the master of the sky, With wings outstretched in flight. Riding the wind to soar up high, With feathers gleaming in the light. Opening my golden beak, I call out my wild cry, As I dash on like a streak, Descending from up high. With a flash of claws, When I make my catch, Tearing off food all red and raw, Talons flexing like a latch. Then soaring off On golden brown wings, With barely a twitch to stay aloft, As the whistling wind sings. | |
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